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Offline Stevie M

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Just words---One Way ticket
« on: October 28, 2010, 11:56:48 AM »
Hiya guys,
Just wondered if anyone fancied having a crack at these words??
Not going to say how I thought of it when I wrote it, see what you can come up with? Maybe a sort of challenge, see how many different versions come out?
They're not set in stone, so can be fiddled around with as you want.



ONE WAY TICKET

There’s nothin’ for me here, scared to go,, gotta get away
Don’t know if I’m comin’ back, gotta go on a different tack
Gotta go and not look back, gotta go, only got a sack
Gotta go and not look back, nowhere to stay, gotta go away
Got no money, got no care, nowhere to stay, gotta get away
Everyones watching, nobody sees, so do I stay or do I go

Gotta go and not look back, nowhere to stay, gotta go away
Got no money, got no care, nowhere to stay, gotta get away
Everyones watching, nobody sees, so do I stay or do I go
Gonna be by myself, just be on my own, no one to chat,
So there’s gonna be no difference in any of that
Might be back some day, but who can ever say
         
        (chorus)
Gonna get a one way ticket, I don’t care where
Gonna get  a one way ticket,  haven’t got a care
Gonna get a one way ticket to fly in the air
Gonna get a one way ticket, I’m just gonna dare
Got nowhere to go, leavin’ nothin’ behind
Get that one way ticket, never no mind

Instrumental break?

Might decide to stay, might just go away, who can say
It’s my choice, right or wrong, probably just roll along
If I stay or go, no one will know, if I’m fast or slow
What’s the point, it’s all the same, just a game
No matter where, it’ll not go away, may as well stay
It’s the same old game, just with a different name

Who’ll dare to think, to care, just stop and stare
No one looking, no one cooking  ,no one at all
Just got one bag, only carries a rag , do I dare
Do I stay or do I go, no one will know where I go
Don’t care if it’s rain, or if it’s snow, gotta go fast
Or Gonna go slow, no one will know, forget the past.

(chorus)
Then fade to end, repeating “one way ticket”?





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Re: Just words---One Way ticket
« Reply #1 on: October 29, 2010, 04:24:58 AM »
Looks good brother I will see what I can come up with, you going to put the lead on it if I do the rest?????
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Re: Just words---One Way ticket
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2010, 08:42:05 AM »
What kind of tempo or percussion do you invision for this?
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Re: Just words---One Way ticket
« Reply #3 on: October 29, 2010, 11:26:05 AM »
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Looks good brother I will see what I can come up with, you going to put the lead on it if I do the rest?????
Tim

Go for it Tim. Yep, I'll have a crack at lead, if you like.

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What kind of tempo or percussion do you invision for this?

Whatever you like---it's completely open to any interpretations :) It could be more interesting that way.
If anyone wants a go, but stuck for an idea, PM me, I'll try to give a 'feel' of what I thought.


 

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